Milk Chocolate

April 22, 2009

The air is like the milk chocolate

We pressed in our mouths

When the day was yellowish-gold

And the grass, twisted and sweet

Like green licorice.

I do not  mind

That the days were never long enough,

And that when we waved our hands

In the smoky dusk,

And felt the thin sweat of daylight

Drip down our necks

We were not fully satisfied.

There was never enough time

To grow up

Between the flower crowns

And sand buckets

The thick trees and wide rivers,

But we did.

And I know we are better for it—

Better, fuller, deeper,

But still not satisfied

5 Responses to “Milk Chocolate”

  1. Joseph Dwyer Says:

    Wow Kristy. That was life, and it sounded so sweet.

  2. Kate Cavallaro Says:

    I absolutely love this. You draw on some important thoughts–we enjoy life by remembering experiences that were essential but not enough. We are always looking for something more, something that will satisfy us completely, and that longing is what drives us on. Your image of the waving hands and the thin sweat of daylight perfectly captures the feeling at the end of such a wonderful but insufficient experience. I really like the paradox you bring up–there was never enough time, and yet there was enough, and we don’t understand how it happened, because we blinked, and it was done. Good work.

  3. elliestevens Says:

    mmmm…. I love this! I love the childlike imagery (flower crowns and sand buckets). Yet, we are never satisfied… so true. Love this a ton! and you! :)

  4. kellytrovato Says:

    Kris, I agree with all the above comments. This is a wonderful poem and it nostalgically conjures up a bittersweet emotion that all people who have to grow up feel. And that’s everybody, (except maybe peter pan)

  5. Kenny Says:

    I smiled and then laughed. Actually laughed.


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